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Just keep on making music. Work more for songs. Think more about changing up drum patterns and using more then one synth. You get better naturally with time and effort. Cheers,

BreeD

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I think the drums need work. And the structure isn't really true DnB. On the positive side I loved the melodies and some of the scratching you did. Really is a good song. Cheers,

BreeD

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Not techno, but very delicious. Cheers,

BreeD

RaptorBKE responds:

well i wasn't sure where to put lol it's kind of DnB but kinda techno too

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Very impressive. I wasn't following the story line very much but the song proves you know quite a bit about making classical music. I couldn't ever write anything like that. Not yet at least. That why I stick with trance/dnb. Anyways good job, Cheers,

BreeD

SinJim responds:

Thanks, Breed, for the comments. Work your way up to it and don't hesitate to do some research on whatever (mixing, orchestration, etc). I'm glad that you liked this and hopefully I'll be coming out with some more along these lines. Thanks again!

~SinJim

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Liked it. The melody is great, but the drums are dry, and the synths need to be redone. Cheers,

BreeD

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I know I've played with that before =) You might want to work on a little more beat diversity though. Cheers,

BreeD

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Its very creative and unique. For sure its got some diversity in it. Really cool song overall. On the constuctive side I think the IDM style DnB you brought in lacked enough power. A tip with that is to use a kick and layer it with the kick in what ever you sliced for a more full sound. Also some parts seem a bit cluttered with sounds. Keep on keeping on. Cheers,

BreeD

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I like the beat you got there, but thats a hip hop beat all the way. You might want to work on slower melodies and synth diversity. It was nice though. Cheers,

BreeD

Va10r65 responds:

Thanx my next song is actually gonna be slower "Dawns Horizon"

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The beat seems to hesitate to much, like it never really drops the beat. The arpeggio you got going the whole time sounds really good, but it needs a more structured beat i think. Bass was well done too. anyways, Cheers

BreeD

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I would say change out that hi hat, or at least add some reverb. maybe after that part lose the kick and have a mellow synth melody carry into a bigger drop that goes back to the original synth. then add more hi hat layers with the drums and ya, should be good. haha idk i'm baked, Cheers,

BreeD

momboom1 responds:

Lol. I think i understand what your saying :D. Thanks for the suggestions.

Michael Breed @TheBreeD

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